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	<description>Improving Student Academic Writing</description>
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		<title>Scoresheet</title>
		<link>http://blogs.norcalwp.org/isaw08/10/51/</link>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 02 Oct 2008 18:24:03 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>rramay</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Scoresheet for Oedipus Rex Here&#8217;s my version of a streamlined scoring guide. I&#8217;m just about to give it a try.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href="http://blogs.norcalwp.org/isaw08/files/2008/10/scoresheet-for-oedipus-rex1.doc">Scoresheet for Oedipus Rex</a></p>
<p>Here&#8217;s my version of a streamlined scoring guide. I&#8217;m just about to give it a try.</p>
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		<title>Student Collaboration</title>
		<link>http://blogs.norcalwp.org/isaw08/09/student-collaboration/</link>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 20 Sep 2008 22:10:42 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Lou</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[I wrote about an idea that I have that uses a template to facilitate student collaboration.  Check it out: Student Collaboration  ]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I wrote about an idea that I have that uses a template to facilitate student collaboration. </p>
<p>Check it out:</p>
<p><a href="http://blogs.norcalwp.org/lburan/2008/09/20/student-collaboration/">Student Collaboration</a></p>
<p> </p>
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		<title>Quick Commenting Gradesheet</title>
		<link>http://blogs.norcalwp.org/isaw08/09/quick-commenting-gradesheet/</link>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 13 Sep 2008 22:23:23 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>kgodwin</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Hi! This is a quick commenting gradesheet I made. I hope it makes you happy. quick-comment-sheet1]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi! This is a quick commenting gradesheet I made. I hope it makes you happy. <img src='http://blogs.norcalwp.org/isaw08/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' />  <a href="http://blogs.norcalwp.org/isaw08/files/2008/09/quick-comment-sheet1.doc">quick-comment-sheet1</a></p>
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		<title>Two-Way Commenting</title>
		<link>http://blogs.norcalwp.org/isaw08/09/two-way-commenting/</link>
		<comments>http://blogs.norcalwp.org/isaw08/09/two-way-commenting/#comments</comments>
		<pubDate>Sat, 13 Sep 2008 22:22:32 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>stephaniep</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[I really liked the idea of &#8220;two-way commenting.&#8221; I created a form where the students write the rough draft of their essay on the lines of the paper (link below), leaving room on the left for teacher comments. Once the student has turned in the essay, the teacher will write comments in the provided area leaving [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I really liked the idea of &#8220;two-way commenting.&#8221; I created a form where the students write the rough draft of their essay on the lines of the paper (link below), leaving room on the left for teacher comments. Once the student has turned in the essay, the teacher will write comments in the provided area leaving room below each comment for student responses. Students will be required to respond to each comment on the comment area before writing a revised version of their essay on traditional paper.</p>
<p><a href="http://blogs.norcalwp.org/isaw08/files/2008/09/two-way-commenting-page6.doc">two-way-commenting-page6</a></p>
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		<title>I really liked the idea of &#8220;two-way commenting.&#8221;</title>
		<link>http://blogs.norcalwp.org/isaw08/09/35/</link>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 13 Sep 2008 22:17:50 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>stephaniep</dc:creator>
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		<guid isPermaLink="false">http://blogs.norcalwp.org/isaw08/09/35/</guid>
		<description><![CDATA[I really liked the idea of &#8220;two-way commenting.&#8221; I created a form where the students write the rough draft of their essay on the lines of the paper (link below), leaving room on the left for teacher comments. Once the student has turned in the essay, the teacher will write comments in the provided area leaving [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I really liked the idea of &#8220;two-way commenting.&#8221; I created a form where the students write the rough draft of their essay on the lines of the paper (link below), leaving room on the left for teacher comments. Once the student has turned in the essay, the teacher will write comments in the provided area leaving room below each comment for student responses. Students will be required to respond to each comment on the comment area before writing a revised version of their essay on traditional paper.</p>
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		<title>My Notes&#8230; Template</title>
		<link>http://blogs.norcalwp.org/isaw08/09/my-notes-template/</link>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 13 Sep 2008 22:04:20 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>avery</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[I am going to try to attach the template&#8230;.  http://blogs.norcalwp.org/isaw08/files/2008/09/my-notes.doc Click on link to download document.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I am going to try to attach the template&#8230;.</p>
<p> <a href="http://blogs.norcalwp.org/isaw08/files/2008/09/my-notes.doc">http://blogs.norcalwp.org/isaw08/files/2008/09/my-notes.doc</a></p>
<p>Click on link to download document.</p>
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		<title>Getting Ready for the First Day</title>
		<link>http://blogs.norcalwp.org/isaw08/08/getting-ready-for-the-first-day/</link>
		<comments>http://blogs.norcalwp.org/isaw08/08/getting-ready-for-the-first-day/#comments</comments>
		<pubDate>Sat, 16 Aug 2008 03:06:05 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>rramay</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[After our meeting, I really began thinking about my first steps those first days of school. You all really helped me think about some of the things I&#8217;ve not been doing, even though I know I should. The first is getting back to reading&#8230;helping people access text that may not be one they want to [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>After our meeting, I really began thinking about my first steps those first days of school. You all really helped me think about some of the things I&#8217;ve not been doing, even though I know I should. </p>
<p>The first is getting back to reading&#8230;helping people access text that may not be one they want to read&#8230;to establish clear purposes for it, and making logical next-step assignmnets that move their reading to a more pertinant writing assignment. </p>
<p>The second is using examples that illustrate my expectations. It&#8217;s not that I don&#8217;t do this, I just need to do it more and with current work done by the kids sitting in the room. So I&#8217;m thinking about this stuff, and am working on taking action on these things. </p>
<p>r</p>
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		<title>Hello ISAW Participants!</title>
		<link>http://blogs.norcalwp.org/isaw08/08/hello-world/</link>
		<comments>http://blogs.norcalwp.org/isaw08/08/hello-world/#comments</comments>
		<pubDate>Tue, 05 Aug 2008 16:46:02 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Lou</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Here is our blog.   It should be pretty easy and straight forward to use.  If you have any trouble, let me know. I hope that this becomes a compelling site that we can come back to frequently throughout this year!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Here is our blog.  </p>
<p>It should be pretty easy and straight forward to use.  If you have any trouble, let me know.</p>
<p>I hope that this becomes a compelling site that we can come back to frequently throughout this year!</p>
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